Tuesday 20 May 2008

High Apartment

The cheap scotch nearly knocked him sick. He opened his wet mouth wide and allowed one ice cube to slide down the tumbler glass and plop perfectly between his teeth, onto his fat tongue.
There he held the cube for a moment before sending it, with a flick of the neck, to the back of his throat. The shock of the snap from the ice alleviated any feeling of nausea.
He glanced over the transcript of the latest dream. He had taken to getting up and writing down immediately, everything he could remember from his dreams, before consciousness wiped them out and they became relics of memory, or the stuff of déjà vu.
His desk, his room, was a mess. With a slight kick of his heels the chair rolled back until the hard wall stopped it. A path through the clutter had been cleared to allow this regular smooth meeting of chair and wall.
Standing, to pull up his pants, the man knocked the blind which flowed upwards, accompanied by a razzing sound, and away. Moonlight bathed the room.
The man moved a few steps, switched off his desk lamp and just enjoyed swimming in this new spotlight, this fresh ambience.
He barely touched the blind. He wouldn’t have touched it tonight, on purpose, but now that it was open and redundant he was struck by its pointlessness as a visual barrier.
No buildings were level with his floor, none higher. He could wave his penis at the window all night and who would care?
“Probably why I keep it closed,” he said aloud, tending to the fiddly process of closing the blind before he bothered to pull up his jeans.
Then he shuffled on, towards the fire-escape; towards the roof and the air.
The cool night air relaxed him and he sucked it in to his lungs. He enjoyed the sound of the traffic far below, and the hum of planes far above. He enjoyed the fact that he could hear no human voices up here; no people talking inanities, discussing the weather (which was pleasant this evening), and re-arranging the minutiae of their lives.
He thought about throwing a small piece of broken brick from the roof, or maybe a coin. He could imagine it hitting something below. But he reconsidered, as there were few people on the streets at this time of night.
He lit two cigarettes and laid them down upon a low brick wall. The man was standing amid the remains of a roof terrace that had been ripped up and conquered long before it had the chance to become overgrown. All that was left now were memories of the life that once grew here.
His thoughts were stuck on falling, that sucking hungry pull that mankind fights so hard against; the benevolent force which keeps us standing still on this ridiculous spinning flying rock of ours.
He’d read, just last week, of a woman who was killed by a man who fell through her skylight. If he wandered to the edge of his building, he wondered if he might see a skylight window below, someone who might be able to see him, or something to aim for.
He decided against looking. The wind was getting up and he hadn’t brought his shirt, he saw goose pimples on his arms and rubbed at them. The two cigarettes were about burnt out. He took these one by one, dropped each on the flagged floor and crushed them under his sandaled foot.
Then he headed back inside and down the short flight of stairs to his apartment; remembering, of course, to shut the fire door behind him.
“One more, before bed,” he said, passing into the lounge and moving towards the drinks cabinet.
He treated himself to a large one, an expensive one. With two ice cubes.

5 comments:

Jaquanda Rae said...

So many gloomy, malevolent possibilities...if he pursues any he'll finally be in control, have the power. The sad irony of being able to/ not being able to act. Really good story.

Thanks for your comments and your heads-up.

akaash said...

visiting ur place after a long time, was almost out of touch with blogging.... missed quite a few of ur posts.. but liked this one.

Paul, don't you think, you should be writing something entirely different than what you write.. i mean, at the bottom of it, it appears, we all write about the same thing: emotions and the empty human existence! ..i am saying this because i see, you've got this energy to write something everyday, quite unlike any of us, ..so u must try it out first.

Ki said...

for some reason this story makes me think the guy is some sort of superhero but doesn't know it yet. like watching the world at night and guarding the precarious balance of our "spinning rock". and don't all superheros have a drinking thing going on anyways?;-)

i have to say "hats off" to you for a daily tale. that requires not only energy, but vivid imagination, talent and perseverance. have you thought of writing a book? a book of short stories?

Anonymous said...

Nice little inter-story connection there. I don't quite understand the lit cigarettes bit, but maybe that obscurity was intentional.

So much remains unrevealed in these little tales of yours...

Svetlana said...

since i'm afraid of hights, i was sitting on pins and needles reading this and going "oh, god, please don't jump". nice.