Friday 13 June 2008

The sight of summer

Lillies and rosemary dappled her hair, his lady blossomed in the sunlight. He reached out his hand to help her and she stepped down three garden stairs onto the dew spattered grass.
They were welcoming the dawn in summer, the solstice was upon them.
It was the 21st day of June and they had sneaked over a high wall using a borrowed wooden ladder. They balanced along the tops of the thick brick wall that housed one of the many gardens of Hanley Hall, until they reached a sturdy trellis they thought they might use to descend.
Though it creaked and it strained, these two lithe creatures did not break the wooden latches that allowed tangled vines and creepers to flow upwards, closer to the glowing sun.
And then, running through the Victorian garden, barefoot upon cool morning stone, their clothes and locks flowed with the movement of their youthful grace, their joy and love, like wild ponies prancing.
He bounded now, ahead of her, and jumped through the open gate (left unlocked the day before) into the wonderful hillside meadow at the edge of Lord Hanley’s estate.
Before him the beautiful patchwork of the English countryside cascaded down to the valley and villages below. An amazing sight, the sight he had come to see, paying true homage to the first rise of the midsummer sun.
It was then that he turned around. Turned around and saw his love standing in the gateway of the old garden, staring not at the view but at him. Her eyes told him this was the view she’d come for. Not the first auburn flares of the seasoned sun; not the field and hedgerows, birds and foxes, bathed again in the magical warmth of midsummer. She had come for him.
And as he helped her down into the meadow’s thick green grasses, even he, this lover of the dawn and worshipper of the ever travelling sun, could not unlock his gaze from the wonderful reflection of her eyes.

8 comments:

Jaquanda Rae said...

I'm in shock - nothing dark or vaguely depressing...hmmmm. Have you been tagged before? I don't have a lot of blogger pals, so there you are!

Being tagged means that you are to make a special post about the book you are currently reading. You should turn to pg 123, and type the 6th, 7th and 8th sentences in your blog. Talk a little bit about the book - the title, author, mini commentary. Make sure to mention the person who tagged you and also tag 5 other persons (include their names in your post and tell them in their comment section). Alas, your blog doesn't really allow you to do this...maybe if you have another poetry day you could...maybe....

K.C. said...

This was really good. Really romantic. Really took me back to that feeling of falling in love. It really did. To be able to write and make people remember how it feels, that is the mark of a really good writer... Kayce

Miladysa said...
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Miladysa said...

The first line hooked me tight.

Lovely tale :-D

Petruchio said...

Beautiful. Absolutely, positively, stunningly beautiful. Again, your writing takes on the ability to inspire strong emotion in its reader. Wow!

- Petruchio

Sucharita Sarkar said...

Reminded me of Hopkins' PIED BEAUTY. Sunlight and bright - dappled shade and rainbow-love...so different when juxtaposed against the tripping-over-too-much-thought, lonesome Colin in the previous STORMY story. Storms and sunshine, your stories are for all weathers.

Anonymous said...

I totally agree with Petruchio. This story sent shivers down my spine and made me remember how it feels to be completely in love with someone. Your writing really is quite amazing in the way it takes the reader to a place where they relive their own experiences.

blackgata said...

Oh to be young again! This story brought back memories from a very long time ago. Great writing as always.